I think the whole song would sound better if it had alittle more flow ya know.
getting better keep it up
Thanx Man. :D Will Try So
I think this would sound much better with the proper compression. For one the fl slayer sounds suck but If you are going to use them you need to work on maybe making them sound more professional...
I think you did ok on the drums, Maybe work on the bass drum some.
I think some notes in the melody where off beat didn't sound right to the main chord progression
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:D Thank You. I have only been using this FL demo only a month so I will work on improving Slayer sound. I do agree thought that the melody was off. Haha just needed something to keep it going though.
Okay, first off, I'd avoid using FL's default samples in tracks, especially for an intro, where it's most obvious.
And your guitar solos are seriously lacking in structure, a guitar solo isn't just a random note roll, they are usually based around scales, and make sense musically.
The main riff is similarly all over the place.
However, with some work and further practise you could fix this.
All I can suggest is that you somehow acquire the full version of FL (your means of doing so are none of my business, claims that serial codes can be found on torrent sites are unverified...) and work on it, because although you seem to have worked out how to use the program, but you need practise!
Listen to more music, specifically the genre which you are trying to create, listen to melodic aspects, and work on it.
The talent is there, but it just doesn't flow well enough, or make sense melodically.
Good luck on future submissions.
Thank You. I do understand the concept of a solo though. I been playing guitar six years, but since time is a factor when your using a demo FL I was unable to have much scale referred sturcture. I do appreiciate your critique it has been one of the most helpful. :D Thank you and till next time.
Until the future
good start! The slayer vst right? Lol, i used to love the solo dire straits preset and dist solo lead preset. Anyways, we all start somewhere!
Yes I did use Slayer. :D