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It's not a bad tune, but I think that we're in the situation here of seeing a piece that has a couple of major flaws - the beat is too basic for my liking. If that could be dealt with, which it was towards the end of the tune, you'd have a much better piece on your hand.

The other major piece that I though needed some work on it was the melody, which might benefit from a little more variation, possibly from something a little less high pitched. Without that sort of backup from the tune, we might just have a piece that is a match winner.

I know it sounds harsh, but you have got the beginnings of a good tune here and with a few tweaks here and there, you could make this so much better.

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Not bad.

The intro was very harsh on the ears, it went quite well with the new instruments that were introduced, as they toned it down a bit. Nice ambient and flowing sound. Keep up the good work.

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this song couldn't get any more perfect.
song was flawless.

Not bad

It's a nice ambiant song overall but with some things to fix, in my opinion. First, as Haggard said, that intro is a bit weird and annoying, it doesn't match the rest of the song. The synth you used in the intro was a bit harsh therefore you could have worked a bit more on the EQ of that synth. About the main chord progression, it was also a bit weird because it used 5 chords - each chord lasting 1 bar - so that 5 bars progression gave an odd feeling to the song.

~ Review Request Club ~

Annyoing intro, much better afterwards

The intro is quite annoying as we only have that one beat to listen to and it hurts the ears quite soon.

Luckily the song picks up after that with some more instruments and melodies. While the "intro beat" is still present here it doesn't hurt the ears as much as it is accompanied by some other very nice melodies.
But still I think you should cut back on the use of the intro beat a bit, in the intro as well as later in the song.

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Credits & Info

3.68 / 5.00

Dec 20, 2008
7:55 PM EST
File Info
3.9 MB
3 min 25 sec

Licensing Terms

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