It really does
It does really have a lot of potential. just fix up the strings and change the repetition and you will a great song
I really like this composition, but it needs a little work. Agreeing w/ Tajjet, you should bring out the bass.
After a bit of tweaking I'm sure you will have a masterpiece of music!
A little repetitive, but good.
It is a little repetitive at the beginning, as you said; there's a little too much repetition overall. Also, bring out the bass a little more in the middle, I could hardly hear it. You get an 8/10 and a 5/5 for actually recording your tracks, however.