The beats are pretty good all though there should be more variety in them.
The thing that took away quality from this is that the lyrics just don't seem to change much or lead anywhere.
So yeah nice effort but it was missing something.
it isnt bad. it isnt great. but it is goodish, i guess. maybe its because of the 80's felling im getting from it. if you added a chorus it would be nicer (or is you already have one, make it more noticeable).
Pleasantly surreal. I agree that the vocals sound similar to Weird Al in parts. It all blends together nicely but until the instrumental section at the end, there isn't much variation previously to mix things up. Other than that, a well crafted piece of music.
Well the vocals were alright but could use work. I know you're famous for that numa thing, but still, I'm going to be real about this. I didn't like it that much. Only because of the vocals, but the backround was alright. I didn't really care for the drums though.
i really enjoyed this song
hehe you kinda sound like weird al in some parts