Interesting ideas, but mixing problems
You have some neat ideas, but the instruments don't really seem to blend well. The reverb seems kind of inconsistent for some reason, especially in the flute, like it would get cut off or start late. The snare probably should have some reverb added as well so it's not so in your face feeling. Basically, just try to play around with the reverb some more so that everything sounds like it's coming from the same hall or whatever.
Musically, it's brief but not bad, especially the first part with the flute and choir mix. Doesn't really remind me of Chiaky, but it's already.
Flute a bit ear-pirceing.... nice.
who the hell zero-bombed this
i want to smack them. i raised your rating 1.94 points. accept it.
Dang Thanks man...You like this?