I gotta agree completely with Des...
Just makes me feel alone yet warm like but the repitition is great and the addition of violins made the song better.
This is a song in need of vocals, me boy
I have never been bised towards instrumentals, but this song's true potential would be unlocked with lyrics. It truly sounds like the background of an old R&B song. Like something one of the Motown singers would use. Maybe a young Micheal Jackson(Jackson 5 young, mind you) or maybe even an Arethra Franklin.
But as sescribed, I see a young boy sitting in a park bench, remebering his love for a girl whom had recently broken up with him. In his hands he holds a wilted flower and melted chocolates. What is left of a last effort to win her back. A single tear drops from his cheek then hits the floor. He looks up only to see his love walk by with another person.
Kudos to you, Bosa, keep up the fight against the zerovoters you shall reclaim the Audiio Portal.
Thank you. You've helped encourage me quite a bit, and I definitely can see vocals being added into this track - it has great potential to be a deep-spirited love ballad.