But that was terrible. I'm sitting here listening to it, hoping that the song will progress but it never does. I't repetitive to a point that it's annoying and you tried to add background noise to mix it up but that does nothing. Please try again.
wow... um...thanks for the constructive criticism...? i think...? if you read the description, this is a work-in-progress i'm writing for my girlfriend--electric lead guitar part to be recorded soon!?! aka, this is the backing track...? it's supposed to be long and mellow and repetitive. have you ever listened to the really long, ambient Aphex Twin stuff??
i noticed on your page that you yourself are not a musician or a composer. that speaks volumes right there. i suppose one cannot please everyone. humph. but you get points for Infected Mushroom and Yngwie ('as if there are any 'other' yngwie j. malmsteen's running about. ha.)... however, if you are only trying to live up to your shallow alias, congratulations, you've succeeded... thus rendering your nonconstructive, insulting criticism moot.
i shall only really be caring about what my lovey thinks, and other musicians who offer constructive feedback. if you don't like something, don't listen. turn it off early. go find other music. no need to be snide about it, jeez.