There were a few cons.
Like I saw a few reviews down, the sub bass frequency is WAY to low.
Next, the rest of the song didn't match the intro, which I enjoyed very much. I thought the intro was the best and like 0:13 was pretty cool. I like that horn noise, but right at like 0:23, it kinda gets funky...
Good job! Just work on it, seeing how it's only your 2nd attempt, I'll be a bit lenient and give you a 10/10 and 5/5.
Nice job dude!!
Awesome fucking bass and reese you've got there. Really fuckin awesome. I might have a heart attact from the pure epicnezz of the reese there.
i'll touch more on a simpler explaination. as far as the bass compression goes... too much low frequency bass (sub bass); muffles it and clashes/distorts with the other bass frequencies in the flow.
the organ is kinda cheesy, specially when it hits solo on the keys. I suggest something else that matches the intensity of the track, cuz the rest of this shit is slammin'!
I also agree with the siren, shit fits suitably well.
Nice work. The reeeessseee bass drrrroooppsss out and sounds totally killer :}
everyone begins somewhere and for a second attempt you allready beat me :} great work keep it up.
I agree with the intro opinion listed by "AuthenticDan," but I must also say that the concept is a really good one. The organ synth doesn't work though. The siren is perfect though. Try different sounds for the chords. Perhaps a dark strings sound? The intro using the drums and siren building up followed by the high synth leading into the DnB is perfect though. Really good energy there! Just work on it, but please please please keep the same concept!
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