I like the effort, but the voice quality was bad. If you practiced it over and over til it was perfect and made an updated version I'd like it more.

Not too many clever rhymes, I'd have liked more rhyme about the game.

I never really liked rap so it wouldn't be fair for me to rate this, I just find rap really boring since it's mostly just a guy rhyming with barely any music behind it.

Well...

rap sucks,
That is what i can only say.sry bro.

well...

it was alright, but didnt quite cut it. Kinda off sync, could have been better tho. nice try

C-rapp-y.

This rap isn't very good. Your voice is very bad quality and your voice is really off beat. It also sounds like you've only practiced this once, so you're pretty bad at this.
Practice more to get your beat down, will ya?