Hmm, well the sounds are somewhat generic. I am sensing some action or chase scene which is very cool. Here is what I thought of.
1) Like the beginning instrument. Sounds ethnic.
2) Very unique blend of instruments. Its like happy sounds mixed with dark evilish kind of sounds. Happy and and evil don't really work well together but kudos for the idea anyway.
3) The delay and panning are well done.
4) 2:41 I like that transition instrument. Great job there.
1) The transition at 19 seconds was kinda weird. Didn't connect that good.
2) Drums are decent. I was expecting better high hat patterns to accompany the kicks.
3) Sensing some repetitiveness going on. Add more instruments or patterns. Use that ethnic sound more in the song instead of just the beginning. :)
Overall its a insteresting blend of sounds with a good story behind it. You just need to use more better instruments. I like your composition so I'm sure your future stuff will also be intriguing. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review.