its a bit too empty imo,
perhapsthe song needs more strings?
try to find some contradicting strings and build up a decent climax!
that, and the drumkit was a bit basic, even for the dance genre
and thats about it, patterns are nice, melodie isnt bad.
overall not a bad job, just pointing out some flaws :D
If you decide to make an improved version please take the trouble to let me know, I would be interested