This is one of these songs I think could be better. Maybe it was planned but it sounds a bit chaotic to me, other than that I feel it could use something more. :)
indeed it was meant to be chaotic, and understandably this might not play out well for some listeners. With a minute limitation it is not feasible to make it jump up and down too much or it gets very tiring to hear too soon.
Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.