I agree with your friends
You can float away listening to this. I actually sat here and listened to it loop for about ten minutes. Gold star for you.
idk why but for a piano style like this the piano melody should get lower as it reaches the end of the measure in some places.. especially on a transition before you bring in the backing instruments and the "climax" beat. good song though i liked it.
I like the melodies A LOT!!!! You just need bass and more things to fill up the song, and the fact that the whole song is just piano with a dance back beat, it just looses its splendor after a while. If you wanted to do a Dance song, you shoulda faded into the song with the piano but changed to a SuperSaw or something (SuperSaw would fit best with this song).
Also don't use that kick layout. Very amateur and repetitive. No "Kick, Kick, Kick, KiKiKick". And never use a snare in place of a claps position.
I just have one question for you. Where are you getting all these effects?
my friends. as i told renoak i just have a way of getting around lol =D
This was really great!
The melody was very moving and not so repetative. The different rhythms you had kept you entertained. So the song was great.
Pointers: Needs better mixing and mastering
Needs other instruments and bass and more FX.
again great job!
and i'll vote ya a 5 :P
thanks man. =D
pretty good :)
i actually liked it :)
ohh thanks =D