yo this was pretty good...ur lyrics r there ur emotion is there...ur flow seems to be sorta on and off..but nothin too bad that u cant fix the next track u drop...this beat is pretty tight...only thing i really have any possible bad feed for would be the mixing...the beat is so high that it seems u pumped the vocals sky high to match it..so certain points i can hear ur vocals max out n it sounds sorta distorted...id reccomend next time..lower the beat..to match the vocals...cuz u can always just put the beat up...if u feel its too low....but again...good job on this man...came out nice
hey thanks for the review.
about the mixing. i don't actually do any mixing really, which is probably why there is a problem with it. i use music maker 11 because i found it a while back for cheap. so i just import a beat i like, throw down some lyrics and try and balance the beat to my voice so one or the other aren't too overpowering. making these songs is just something i do if i'm bored.
appreciate the honest review man. thanks
Some dope shit right hurr
Loved the beat to pieces man. Wish I could take it home with me and treat it to a lovely evening, that's how much this beat was poppin'.
Lyrics were all on beat which is already better than a lot of NG rappers. Gotta work on ya "punches" a bit more though if ya know what I mean. Bars that make ya go "OHHHH! SNAP!" Hooks are what make people listen to your songs more than once. You've got insane potential, great mic. presence. I wanna hear more shit from ya.
Stay up brah.
4.30 / 5.00 (+ 0.021)
thanks a ton for the review. i'll keep all that in mind.
I liked the beat, flow sounded good lines are nice aswell, got ma 5 4.39 / 5.00 (+ 0.015)
Keep it pimpin'
thanks for the review
I heard a dope rhyme flow there, but i couldnt make out most of the lyrics.
TURN THAT SHIT UP SON!
thanks for the review. i followed your advice and turned the vocals up some. let me know what u think.
The voice ruined it
yeah, home-made voice tracks are kinda crummy :/
Much better instrumental
But nice try though