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hey all. first i want to thank YunVeroz for making an awesome beat. check out the original and show some love. http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/156465
this track was different from anything i have written before and was a lot of fun to make. enjoy

updated the song. the first version was just a rough cut. once again, enjoy :)

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not bad

yo this was pretty good...ur lyrics r there ur emotion is there...ur flow seems to be sorta on and off..but nothin too bad that u cant fix the next track u drop...this beat is pretty tight...only thing i really have any possible bad feed for would be the mixing...the beat is so high that it seems u pumped the vocals sky high to match it..so certain points i can hear ur vocals max out n it sounds sorta distorted...id reccomend next time..lower the beat..to match the vocals...cuz u can always just put the beat up...if u feel its too low....but again...good job on this man...came out nice

Teatac responds:

hey thanks for the review.
about the mixing. i don't actually do any mixing really, which is probably why there is a problem with it. i use music maker 11 because i found it a while back for cheap. so i just import a beat i like, throw down some lyrics and try and balance the beat to my voice so one or the other aren't too overpowering. making these songs is just something i do if i'm bored.
appreciate the honest review man. thanks
-tea

Some dope shit right hurr

Loved the beat to pieces man. Wish I could take it home with me and treat it to a lovely evening, that's how much this beat was poppin'.
Lyrics were all on beat which is already better than a lot of NG rappers. Gotta work on ya "punches" a bit more though if ya know what I mean. Bars that make ya go "OHHHH! SNAP!" Hooks are what make people listen to your songs more than once. You've got insane potential, great mic. presence. I wanna hear more shit from ya.
Stay up brah.
4.30 / 5.00 (+ 0.021)

Teatac responds:

thanks a ton for the review. i'll keep all that in mind.

Not bad

I liked the beat, flow sounded good lines are nice aswell, got ma 5 4.39 / 5.00 (+ 0.015)
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

Teatac responds:

much appreciated.
thanks for the review

idk man

I heard a dope rhyme flow there, but i couldnt make out most of the lyrics.
TURN THAT SHIT UP SON!

Teatac responds:

thanks for the review. i followed your advice and turned the vocals up some. let me know what u think.

-tea

The voice ruined it

yeah, home-made voice tracks are kinda crummy :/
Much better instrumental
But nice try though

Teatac responds:

thanks

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Listens
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Downloads
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Votes
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Score
3.80 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 15, 2008
4:21 PM EST
File Info
Song
2.7 MB
2 min 55 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.