good for a start!
Weill good to know you have FL studio and are having fun on it. And cracking on the song pretty well. I would probably tweak around with the timing to get this nailed well. Good try, though :)
I've given up on FL studio. I've always been good at classical, FL studio is more for techno (or stuff with a beat). I'm going to stick with stuff on the keyboard... it's more natural for me.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.