WELL, um, hmm

That's... certainly different. It's a little irritating by itself, and its speed doesn't quite help with its strangeness.

I think what you could do is slow it down just a tad, and make it not so... stringy. I know that doesn't make any sense 'cause it's a guitar, but you know what I mean.

It kind of feels like almost a Wagnerian (spelled right?) piece, and I can almost imagine it being played with a harpsichord. Anyway, this could benefit with some bass or at very least, drums. Keep it up