Keep it up;)
ok let i keep it fair, try to work on your idea's that it fit's in together. loops sounds pritty cheap, try to make your own;) i know it takes some time but it will go better after;). tips for mastering mix ur kick arround -4 dB ~ 0 dB always oke.
tips for hihats: add some hicut on it. bass u probably know.
took me 2/3 years till i understand how it works with Structure, Effects, Mastering, creating own synth's. but keep it up.
Drats!! Thanks for the hi-hat filtering note..ah...totally forgot about that :( Using a vintage warmer to make it have a bit more of a tape sound. Mastering according to headphones...small mind you :\ just won't cut it for the mastering particles of the exoskeletal phases between kicks and synths. I figured that the synths acting as a side-chain with the kicks was in some sort of an..okay :D