Fan-fucking-tastic.

I dont usually give 10's

got this on my iPod. usually listen to it atleast once a day.

favorite techno song atm too.
grats man.

this is fantasitc.

i absolutely love this. iv listened to it heaps.

Hey Sky

Yea, this is better but the mastering didn't do much. The whole song's setup is the problem. As hearless said, the melody is repetitive and you should try starting off by scratch. Try listen to some nice trance songs for a good example of song setup and also some nice inspiration. Renoak did a good job, but I reckon it would have been better for her to recommend a whole change.
Anyway, keep it up.

-Cheers Brando

Bleh =/

Still empty. This is not RenoakRythem's fault, as she can't really make the older version of this into an amazing epic Trance song if the original wasn't that good to begin with. You still need a lot to learn my friend, as this song is still extremely empty. The setup of the song isn't very good, and it's extremely repetitive, being that the main lead never ever changes. You still need to fix a lot, and I don't believe that anything more can be done to this song, try starting off scratch and spending A LOT of time on it. Listen to some Basshunter, as that is obviously the kind of music you are trying to make. Get the VST plugin Nexus, as that is an extrememly good VST for the kind of music you are trying to produce, and it's a ROMpler (all presets).

Overall, I didn't really like the song even with Renoak's mastering. Try and try again until you succeed.

{DJ-HLS}