For a first submission it's a very good one. Still haves some minor problems at the midle/late song and it's bit quiet. Anyway it's a good song. Keep doing a good work.
The goal of this piece was to be a quiet, relaxing song with a little of everything in there. I actually consider this to be my best song out of the four I've done so far, so I hope to improve my technique. But thanks for the thumbs up. I was actually kind of nervous submitting my work for the first time.