This track sounds sad and soothing at the same time. I don't have any cons about it other than length -- it should be longer.
It was meant as kind've an intro... to a non-exist album. Don't ask, I was probably drunk (kidding).
Thanks for the review :D
A far-out moody, hi-tech cyber-punk epic
Citing the poor review (not damning... just poorly written) I figured you needed one of these. The ambient tracks in your collection, albums and otherwise, are quite mellow and worth a good listen. This is no different; for what it is worth, it is both transporting and interesting.
Originality gets an eight because you took time out and showed your lady the ropes of your business. Cooperating together, even if it seems subpar, is great for a relationship! I also like how her voice sample--muffled in the background but ethereal in a sense--juxtaposes the obviously technological sources of most every sound. Place in the heartbeat for subtle humanlike flair and you have what I call a cyber-punk adventure in under two minutes. Very strange...
You got Diversity a 6. There aren't that many sounds, and it seems thin, but there's enough going on that you don't really pay attention to the number of sounds or whatever.
Clarity gets 4 because her voice is muffled. That might be intentional--correct me if I'm wrong.
Effort gets a six. This doesn't sound like it took a great deal of effort, considering what it is.
Overall, you should get a six. But I play nice and grant an eight. This song is a testament to playing cool in a relationship and makes for an unusual device that might make it into a flash game.
Dang! Such a great review for such a mediocre song :) Thanks though. I didn't put a whole lot of effort into this one. I just wanted an intro for my "album" so I made it real quick.
Haha, oh hell nobody reviewd it so i figured what the shit man. haha
Very insightful review...