It sounds great in the beginning as the reviewer below me said already, but at around :50 in it sounds too lacking, You could put a few background things in such as a bass noise or a drum fill. Other then that pretty good!
Very interesting song. I quite liked the intro mostly.
The rest of the song seemed to lack a lot. You went from a great melody into a very simple melody. I don't like that. It didn't flow very well.
The overall composition of the song was good. I really liked it. Your percussion was great. I really liked it.
Overall great work dude,
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.