The sounds go well together.
I dig the sound you introduce at 0:30.
The ending was just a bit lacking for me, but all in all, it's great.
Not a bad tune.
It's not a bad tune that you have there, and the arrangement is pretty good.
There are some balance problems though. You threw a lot of the instruments over to the right, and not enough on the left side to balance that out. It kind of throws the listener off. The clap for one, should be balanced on both side. Or if you wanted it panned to the right, have it only panned a little. Same goes for the stick on the left. Both should be brought closer to the center.
Keep working on it.
ahh thanks, im still working on the panning side of things.
ill keep working on it...
however being somone with little money i only have the trial of fruity loops which means i have to make a whole song in one sitting so i wont be able to change this one now.
its a nice song and the title matches. it sounds like it could be in an anime tv show.