This song has lots of potential.
This song could actually be really good. It had some potential until about 00:39 when that terrible guitar came in. It started too abruptly, drowned out all the other instruments, and almost destroyed the listener's ear drums.
As for the voice, if you use your own, this song could get pretty good. Try to power up your kick a bit, and try not to use too many presets.
6/10 because it could be really good.
Thanks for the helpful review!