Nice rhythm guitar notes, great melody, awful lyrics.
Use the word "fuck" all you want, but the problem is you just seemed to take whatever rhymed and threw it in the lyrics, and it didn't really have an impact as such. Not on me anyway. Unlike Metallica or another metal band with their lyrics (if you know what they're saying). I don't mind changes from a major sound to a minor sound, but it didn't really fit into this song. Especially with god-awful lyrics like that. It sounded improvised. And improvisation is good, but not when you release a song like this on a CD for $11.90 (which to me translates as £7. Which doesn't really seem worth it). I'm sure your fans would disagree, but oh well it's your life.
Everything else: 7/10
i mean musicaly speaking its effing awesome but lyrically speak it beyond ordinary
come on there so many "ill never be what you want me to be" songs it's become
a cliche but thats the only negative aspect about it
well ..... :(
not bad but ....i like punk it's just .....not that good and wtf did you (or he) know that the song is free?! .....:(
You guys need to practice and possibly work on this song a little more. At the beginning I was liking it but then not far into the first you lost the rythm and the lyrics, wheres the sense behind some of them? then the prechorus the rythm fell away completely, but then you get it back into gear as you go into the chorus and that was good made me feel like going out and revolting. But then you kept the rythm as you went into verse 2 but then the lyrics;
Don't give a damn if you criticize
You can antagonize,
But I won't compromise
And I won't give into your fucking lies
those right there what are you doing? It just didn't sync to me because it was like you were looking anywhere for simple rhymes for a child's poem. Just what ninja-r-us said you have a voice use, well I'm saying you have a mind and a great idea for a song use that to devise better rhymes then that. Follow the theme don't just do what rhymes. Now the reggae breakdown, where was smooth transition??? Put a little more there to make it sync its just doesn't work the way you went into it. But overall it was a cool little reggae thing maybe a little bit of lyrical work here to. But I mean i was hoping for something a little more original and worked on but thats too high of an expectation. But your doing decent so do whatever this is just my opinion. and for whoever actually read this you have patience to read the longest fucking post in the reviews lol, and congratulations to you for finishing it!
i don't find here many of a punk rock genre
as just song is ok
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