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DjSc00p-Secret Pocket

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I didn't spend much time on this which is why its so short, but I will probably make it longer and complete this song :)
Give me some advice, feedback, and some good criticism :)

I'm not that experienced making music and its sort of new to me so be nice :D



sorry but thats all i can say

This could turn out to be great!

You really should finish this song.


Man, This is GREAT!!!

DjSc00p responds:

Yeah, when i hopefully get a new computer i will finish this for sure :D


its very good but one prob its to short

DjSc00p responds:

Yeah, i dont think i can make a full song until i get a new computer. Fl tends to lag like crazy when i make songs. So im forced to stop early :[

Good, almost everything is great!

This is really good, you've got some great things going for you as far as melody and foundation, but I think what you should focus on in your next song in your percussion. It's all there, and it would be alright, but it definitely doesn't drive the song quite as well as it should It comes off sort of muted and dampened by the leads, I'd like to hear this song with the drums re-mastered, that would be 10/10 material. You've got great music here, just try to fill out that percussion a little more.
Oh! One more thing, this is just my opinion, but try separating the repeat of the introducing melody (right after the snares build up) with some intense echoing sound effect, something to sort of pound the intro into the listener's head. Or maybe put it somewhere else, but I feel like this needs something to shift it suddenly into overdrive.
Great arrangement, keep working on it please.

DjSc00p responds:

Yeah, cant really hear percussions in this lol. Well ill try to make percussions better and more noticable in the future :) Thanks for the review!

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4.32 / 5.00

Dec 9, 2008
9:27 PM EST
File Info
2.5 MB
1 min 7 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.