it's too simple, and the buildup doesn't work very well.
the melody in itself is quite nice, but you use it over and over, and even the nicest melodies can become repetitive after just a short while.
the percussion is too minimalistic for what you're trying to do.
also you are completely lacking transitions, which is never a good idea
Too bad you didn't like it. Repetition is a common event in house music by the way. :) Although this track can't totally be defined as house music.
I'm ofcourse still in the learning process of producing tracks, and I personally think it's getting a lot better in comparison to my older tracks.
Thanks for your review, i'll use your advice! ;)