Sorry, not hitting the right levels.
Sorry, but this is not worth the scores it is getting. You seem to be neglecting the flare of the original: the trumpet parts in particular. This tune doesn't work up to the FF7 original and, as harsh as this sounds, you don't seem to put the care behind such a well known track. The instrumentation is good, but as my title may suggest, you should have tweaked the channels somewhat to bring the trumpets a bit more forward. You mentioned that you tried to make this an orchestrated version, yet it still sound too manufactured. To have an orchestral sound, you need to make sure Nothing sounds like it's computer generated. a few tweaks could have seen you at a 3-7, but right now, you score at a 2-5 for me.