Congratulations on your ability to put a bunch of Macintosh Garageband Loops together and call it a song. I know everyone who reads this will be on a different OS, but if you do. Do not give this song any praise. It must be buried under the weight of the internet.
This song sounds pretty good. Just a little detail hurt my ears : it's the way the lead switches. You should progressively cut the previous part of lead instead of what it is in the song (0:11, 0:25 and 0:33 ).
But keep on!!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.