this was really good
its a real simple beat but it keeps you locked in regardless
the only real thing I think I would have changed is making the voice more understandable, but its all good as it is so nice work :D
Thanks! And yeah, I will redo the voice on this one.
It's original, but the fact that the lyrics are barely understandable makes it a bit repetitive. the beat is good tough.
I think it's pretty original the way you did it. But maybe try to make the lyrics more easy to follow.
I see. The lyrics is really the most important part of this song. Maybe I'll improve the voice in the future. Thanks for you review!
It was good, but instead of using a synth, i say use your voice (or someone elses) along with the synth voice
O rly? Like, using them separate, instead of mixing them together through a vocoder you mean? Nah, I'm too shy sing directly... *blushing*
Don't know any singers either.
Btw, my recorded voice for this song sounds truly horrible. I'm not even singing, I'm hissing. :P
It's good. Yet I think you need to make that vocoder less squeely. Way too high pitched.
Good beat to keep you entertained. So 5/5 8/10
Yeah, it is a bit high, isn't it? The song actually gets much worse when you can't hear the lyrics. Everything is about the story.
Thanks for your vote n review!
I like this
This is actually a pretty nice song. The instruments are simple, but it still kept my interest. I like that vocoder... sometimes is was hard to understand it without the lyrics, but it still sounded nice. What's the sound you blended your voice with?
Anyway, I really liked the lyrics, and the progression really helped the lyrics along. Very nice job on this, keep up the good work!
I used some preset in the plugin Sytrus. Can't remember which. I'm glad you liked it, even though the voice is a bit unclear. :)