Some real nice sounds here. I like the textures. I could definitely see a lot of potential uses for this sucker. Nice work.
Not a horrible mess of noobness...
However you need to get away from such a short drum beat. Try exploring with a drum synth and longer loops for the drums.
Everything else was smooth.
Yeah, I realize the percussion wasn't the best part of the song. Although I'm not sure where to look for the best synths for those, I'll try to work with the beat itself in future songs. Variance and whatnot I guess. Thanks for the tip.