its pretty good, i think you need more of a umph in your kick, and make ur main melody louder and that scratchy "melody" thing you have in the beginning shuold get quitter, so u can still hear it, but the main melody should take over.
also, you might want to make the main melody more "scratchy/ synthie" and at the same time, you definitely should make sure you have some sort of melody at all times, like at 0:54, it just like some guy beat boxing kinda, and he is throughout the whole song, yet when the melody is there, its kinda less audible.
i would replace the beat boxer thingy w/ some other sound, thats pretty annoying lol .
but overall pretty well put together =]
keep it up.
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