percussion was pretty off. at first i thought it was you bumping around on the mic. should probably fix that dude.
also, the percussion becomes really tinny and fading sounding at around the 1 minute mark.
really digging the guitar though =) when the two guitars come in, it starts getting a bit messy. i think that's volume issues with both guitars though, because one will be turned up when it's not really playing anything like at 3:08.
3:24-3:30 also sounds really messy.
throughout the song, some random breaks in the music, which kind of slowed down the song.
love the solo =) just need to put it in the forefront, and not behind random bass notes =P
sorry for writing so much. you have talent, just need to clean it up a bit so that the best parts are showing at the best times. good luck =)
Thanks for the review. It's actually piano and guitar at first :P
You bring up important points, I'll keep them in mind for next time, but this was really something I did in about an hour or less for school :P
Holy crap! You are good at guitar!
Thanks dude! :D