its a great song love the build up . should be longer though it has alot more potential than 1:05 . but overall superb.
Sounds like this could have gone somewhere. Lots of interesting sounds mixed together but why only 1:05? I'm only voting low on this because this song set me up and then completely failed to deliver due to poor structure/buildup and the fact that its too short. I'd suggest working more on it and make a full length song, i.e., not 1:05.
As for the music the only thing I'd suggest changing is to cover more of the spectrum, there's little bass to be heard. I got beyond terrible pitch perception, but there's no doubt in my mind the 40Hz-250Hz is lacking; whether its not round enough of simply not loud enough. What you have sounds great (I like the tom at :14), just add some bass and if you can add some power to the mix with a harder kick.
I really like the song at :36, if you could have built the entire track off that part, making a buildup to it and just somehow add some power to it all, this song would be the shit! 3/3.
At first I thought "what a terrible music!" (I'm a music critic), but then it somehow turned out nice. But the whole thing sounded a bit elsewhere, like quality was really low. It's could be better :)
haha thanks i think? :P
yeah quality sucks.
nice pop happy song
me thinks if you made this into an alternative rock piece, it would sound the shit,
but as it stands with the rest of the trance community,
it is better than average
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