The pad in the beginning is a bit harsh, and it starts a bit too slow IMO. The piano melody is actually quite good, but there are quite a few annoying background effects.
Good job though. It just needs work, then it'll be nice.
Very, very nice
I really like what you've done here. The synth-guitar-ish sound with the piano definitely works, and the synth pad that comes in near the middle and lasts the rest of the song is the icing on the cake.
Excellent piece. Keep 'em coming.
=O I just now heard the fast ending part of the song. You just got your ninth star XD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.