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Dec 5, 2008 | 10:12 PM EST
File Info
7.5 MB
5 min 29 sec
4.02 / 5.00

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Rated 4.02 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

Hey guys

This is my latest track, got nothing much to say about it other than that I think I mastered this one much better than all my previous tracks

Yeah I know, nobody like's Donk bass but me

Anyway criticize away



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The first minute was...bleh

But, Once you hit the one minute mark, it was much better. You need a grasp at keeping things in time with each other. The melody at the beginning wasn't even close to being on time.
When the second melody came in, it was better, but kinda repetitive. And when you had that low bass/piano come in at about 2:48, the higher note was REALLY annoying to listen to.
If it was softer, or lower it woulda been better. But liek before, you got much better after that. Beat was kinda bleh.

I'd give you a 5/10. It was good but there is definetly room for improvement.


*Just because I have an ear for music doesn't mean I can make it ;)

sbooy responds:

Thanks man, ahh yeah now that you mention it at 2:48 then synth is kinda annoying,I think I'll just remove that and just let the piano play

Also the melody at the begging was deliberately put off beat(just like it is in the rest of the track) and the fact no other other melody is accompanying it so that would be the reason why it's sounds off time.