pretty dang good
only thing stopping this from a 10 is the skippy gtr (could be the upload) in the begin., and it sounds like your vocalist is holding back a bit
music is sick...singing kinda weak...
I agree with everyone else
everything except the vocals are good in this song. I would say go for a more strong vocals. like the singer to killswitch engage or all that remains. When they sing clean vocals it has a strong feeling to it. i would say that kind of vocals would work perfect. other than that this is a cool song.
....other then the 'whiny' vocals..its pretty good...work on the vocals man and you can go to a record company and sell this shit!
ive been listening to ur others songs and i think that all ur songs r great, with great vocals and guitar/drums.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.