I'm seconding the intro/outro commentary in the review below. I really dig those parts a lot - remind me a lot of Dave Navarro's solo efforts. The middle part struck me more as funny - I don't mean that in a derogatory way, I mean it in a sort of Tenacious D kind of way, so the middle is good in its own right but I just dug the intro so much I was hoping for more of that. Good stuff either way.
Actually when I wrote this, it was just supposed to be a quick, funny song. I ended up really liking the intro, so I threw that arrangement in one more time at the end. Thanks for the review!
Overall, very good
Hey, just checked out the track: nice work. Myself, I really dig the intro/outro melodic jamming part. If I was to build upon it, I would just keep it at that and add another melodic chorus etc. while taking out the heavy part (that's just my opinion though). Really cool track though. Thanks!
Thanks for listening and taking the time to review! Constructive criticism is always welcome!
Hey, catchy tune!
I like the instrumental and vocal combination in this song. Although, the I don't understand the lyrics, the song itself is a decent piece of work and may provide potential! Keep working at it!
Thanx for the review! Yeah, this song isn't really suposed to make much sense, just a kind of tribute to that amazing adult entertainer Lily Thai.