like- no scratch that--LOVE IT!!!!!!

dude this is one good piece of techno music!!!! i wish u luck @ the John Lennon Songwriting Competition!!!

freaking awesome! <3<3<3

My last review for today

I enjoy this a lot like the others, although techno is not really my genre. this is for the most part well composed and played. your synth riff that carries the beginning of the song could flow better and be quieter. But im probably preaching to the choir. Keep up the good work!

its not quite there for your style!

well, for Logic Synth pro has many tricks and bounds but there is a way to master them, however you still need to learn how the trade goes....
but i do like how it loops, kind of sounds like Star Ocean music but that's okay, I like the end of it, it really picks up after words,
calm down the guitar part, what kind of dimension you wanna be in Hell?
Up the bass, it will have more tone,
percussion is excellent
synthesizer needs work, bring it down a couple of notches but not so much that i can't really here the loop of the guitars
I would like to here a bit of your piano magic, it will bring in a little more mystery into your piece.
ummm....add some kind of other sound, like one of those thingies that you spin around at parties and they make that rattle sound, not sure what they are but that could add something cool to this,
USE A LOT OF CREATIVITY OKAY! The skies the limit!

dosent really mix

dont really mix atall but i still like it