ROARH!
Nice beat in the beginning, but I ain't as impressed about the vocal as the guys bellow. It's nice, don't get me wrong, but it's a part of the remix pack, meaning its just a mare sample:)
The kick is pretty neat too, but the bassline is a LITTLE to low. That cymbal thingy you have on every kick gets a little anoying in the end, and so does the pads.
I didn't really feel like this track had any energy to it:S You need to use more effects and a hihat of somesort wouldn't hurt eather.
Try n' vary your kick as well. It's realy REALY monotonous.
And last but not least (even though I say this in ALOT of reviews), you should use more reverb to give your song a more interseting feel to it:)
You could eventually try n listen to one of the MANY other remixes made of this song to get some inspiration:)
And to the guy bellow: The voice is saying "be alive" even though it's really hard to hearXD