Totlly awesome, added to favourites!
lol i was raving round ma room to this =]
So, you decided to make a song called "dance"...
what a gimmick!!!
because the song has such little danceability for its title and marketed genre.
yeah, it wasn't supposed to be sensible, i made it ages ago. i just wanted to ee what ppl thought
you had the right idea
the part from 28-41 i thought was really good but you main overall problem is that its to inconsistant. It has no flow....at all. Hopefully you see this so you can improve on your style. Atleast in my eye you seem to be going towards a techno/dance. Also the wind thing was totally wrong for this kind of song. If you want you can pm me and i can try to give a little more insight how ever unexperienced it is. But GL the parts were good but not together like this maybe in there own individual songs.
decent base sounds but much to go from there