needs a bit of work at the start
The song started with kicks by themselves, not quite a good idea cause it kinda leaves people waiting for more stuff to happen and usually it gets quite dull. maybe adding a small pad effect in the intro or another type of softer kick between the other kicks to give it that faster effect.
But this is entirely my opinion so go and do whatever, great music though :)
I agree with midimachine. It doesn't sound like the intro actually starts until about 1:00ish... maybe you should start it there and build up from there. Otherwise, it's not too bad. Keep up the good work ^_^
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an intro really should build up a mood and an atmosphere a lot better than this. i was left twiddling my thumbs for the first 30 seconds or so.
i think this sort of intro could be appropriate for DJ-ing in theory but in practice both your drum samples and the arrangement of the percussion are dreadfully bland so it wouldnt make for an interesting transition during a set at all.