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This is my second project uploaded to newgrounds...I hope you enjoy, during the making...I thought the song needed some sounds...so i added some, and its named Rhemdonesian because it was the most random thing on my mind. Reviews and votes are Appreciated.

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Synths FTW

The synths are the crème de la crème of this song. I love the different effects that were used. The only thing was the adverse change of sound at 0:56 and 1:06. It went from this bubbly-fat synth to those metallic-flat sounds. I love it though!


synths and stuff are... interesting, but the mix is painfully loud and it clips a whole lot. you could put a default compressor preset on the master bus and turn the master volume down the smallest amount and it would solve the clipping but the best solution would be to mix things a bit more subtly...

the loop lacks a coherant theme and structure too, which is a shame... sounds like the middle section of some progressive epic thingy... idk...

CardboardBox responds:

yea...it does kinda go off beat...I'm making another song right now in the working, it should turn out better than my others.


I think that this song is awesome! Although, against what you said in the description, I thought it all fit together into one solid melody in my mind. I just downloaded it right now.

10/10 + 5/5 for the song.

Now for some constructive criticsm.

I liked the way you compiled the song. However, it could be longer. Say, 3:30? Idk, I'm just suggesting.

So, thx anyway!


CardboardBox responds:

Well thanks for the positive review but...I'm still learning to put songs together, and when I get really good I will probably make them pretty long.

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Dec 4, 2008
10:05 PM EST
File Info
2.1 MB
1 min 9 sec

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