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Green With Eyes (Unfinished)

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Uploaded
Dec 4, 2008 | 11:09 AM EST
File Info
Song
2.9 MB
3 min 11 sec
Score
3.47 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.47 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,234 Plays | 88 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Indie
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Author Comments

It's actually called "Green With Eyes, Azure With Love" but it wouldn't let me fit the whole thing into the title box, haha.

Anyway, this isn't a finished product by any means. I rather just wanted to upload this to get some input on whether it was even worth finalizing or not. So... yup.

This song's about a girl named Azsure (I know, the color is spelled "Azure" but that's how her name's spelled) and me falling in love with her after a recent breakup. Sometimes songs just have to tell stories!

~Tovi~

Reviews


DrMDrM

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nicely done

Thank you for bringing emotion and some actual vocals to the portal. It's a great change and very refreshing.
It's a nice tune, with some real heart in there.

The guitaring sounds pretty good. But that's not my area really. But it's good nonetheless

The vocals are nice, kinda hard to hear, but that's the quality. Nice harmonies and good lyrics too.
One thing, however, is I'm not really so sure about the amount of times you have harmonies. Cos, you use them to emphasise phrases or words or choruses. But, you seem to be harmonising every other word really. So it doesn't stand out, but kinda blends in and gets repetitive.
A final thing is, you can sing louder. As the song progressed it built up, and the guitar got louder and more passionate... But the vocals sounded around the same volume. Don't be shy to belt it out.


Tovi-Noname responds:

Haha, problem is, belting it out with this microphone causes major scratchyness with the speakers, so unfortunently I can't sing as loud as I wanted to. I had to be a be careful (somehow the guitar never seems to make it do it, though).

I was really just experimenting with the harmony parts, as I've done it before but was trying to do something different... didn't work out the way I'd planned, but hey, you've got to make mistakes to learn to fix them, haha.

Thanks for listening!

~Tovi~


codesycodesy

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

AAGH

DUDE!
TUNE YOUR GUITAR!

Aside from that, all right. Kudos for singing, which most people don't seem to have the guts to do here. And I like the guitar melody towards the end.

Yeah, finish it up, see how it sounds with more polish. But tune up that axe.


Tovi-Noname responds:

Yeah, for some reason my guitar doesn't like to stay in tune when I put the capo on it. I need to fix it, haha. If I make a finished product I'll of course be using a guitar that will work better. I just figured this one was alright for a general idea.

Thanks for listening!

~Tovi~


darthdubadarthduba

Rated 4 / 5 stars

to bad for the soundquality.

I like it. Some people that actually play themself instead of wasting their times on using programs ( Like me as well ). Respect for putting some real emotions on this site. Just to bad its pretty hard to hear.

Greetz Duba
Please review my new song, I did the same for you ; )


Tovi-Noname responds:

Haha, yeah, the quality bites, but I can't afford any good equipment. ^_^

Regardless, I did the best I could with the resources at hand, and I think it turned out alright for the situation.

Thanks for listening!

~Tovi~