You definitely have the correct flow, the timing is good, but like the other said... That is no screaming...
Are you trying to inhale scream? Inhale screaming is for deathcore panzies who cannot scream. Scream. SCREAM. Just let the air out, think of something that pisses you off, try not to hurt yourself, once it hurts, you're doing it wrong. Don't be afraid to be loud.
There are many ways to scream, don't try to sound like someone else, everyone's voice is different. Practice screaming into pillows, if you're afraid someone will hear you. lol
Nice lyrics btw.
To be honest... Thats EXACTLY what I'm afraid of... I am kind of holding back because I'm afraid people will think someone trying to rape me or something...
I will find some time this week or maybe next week and try to improve on this.
Thank you for your tips.
Wow... needs a lot of work.
It sounds like you're trying to growl/scream very quietly... which is kind of self-defeating.
Unless you have to, you should be letting loose with everything you have.
Seriously, back off the mic about a foot and just yell, push from your diaphragm and go all out.
When your throat starts hurting, stop for a while and drink some cool water.
Then when it feels okay again, go back to it. Don't overwork yourself starting out, though - you'll fuck your voice up bad.
Keep working on it, you'll get there eventually.
I like your lyrics... do you mind if I do this song with your lyrics?
Hey man, thanks for you input, I will defiantly try it out.
And yes, you can use the lyrics and (sing) with this track too.
Goto deathkllr84's Await The Retribution.
I would love to hear what you have got. :D
give up and die in a ditch! haha, just kidding, man. seriously though, your vox really need some polishing. you should probably change your technique, since you don't really deliver anything with these vocals. very dull, and you don't really seem to have control over your voice, if you know what i mean. can't really give you any tips, since i don't really growl myself. well, that all seemed rather negative, but hey, it's a decent first effort, so i'll give you a 6 and a 4. all you need is practice. keep rocking \m/
Thanks man. Well ATM I'm trying to find my voice. I am a drummer for 7 years, guitarist/bassist for two years and am trying to lern how to sing/growl/scream. ATM I've got the singing thing down, but I'm working really hard on the other two.
I gave up for about 6 months and when I heard deathkllr84's songs they just made me wanna get back into. So here I am, 6 months later, trying to find my voice again,
Thanks for your views, and hopefully I will find my voice and do a more better version of this song.
I want to get this song down pact and with the same lyrics.
Thanks again man.