So I wanted to find your first submission on here, and compare it to what you are writing now. It is nifty indeed.
I love the strings that come in a little after the 1:00 mark. And that sound around the 1:30 mark is fucking intense man. Cool as all hell. I really love the dissonance in that section. What sounds did you use for that industrial effect? The machine effect is so cool, I wanna use it in something myself.
Then the strings come in VERY nicely. Creates a very stimulating effect aesthetically. Really makes the ears rise up in attention, that is for sure.
Going in my favorites immediately! 5/5 and 10/10. I truly love this piece.