Ice, this is one of his first songs stupid. Go check out one of his new songs, DERP. So shut it.
its sounding pretty good but thats it! you have to learn more about fl man and dont use the base instruments. wath i recomend is making not only chords but a melody too. if you get further ill will give you a grade thats maybe over 5 but for now: YOU GOT TO ImPROVE 4 GODS SAKE!!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.