Good stuff here
The melody is definitely depressing. But as darkmaster said, different sound's would have definitely made this. Unfortunately that fruity slayer is a deal breaker.
9/10 for potential :D
Well I had a depressing moment today so the first thing I thought of was to make a song.
So I opened FL studio and I guess it shows.
sounds pretty cool
I'd have a real guitar player play your guitar parts for you, because FL slayer really killed it for me. the melody was very depressing, only thing I would do is change up some more parts, because it gets repetative.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.