Alright. You progressed backwards a bit.
Now when I said you were better at techno, I meant you were good at original techno. With this song, you seemed to use a very basic and common beat. It feels....so......unlike you.
Until 2:52, the song is extremely repetitive. The bland, dun dun chick dun da dun chick chick beat rattles on for a while. You want to stay away from stupid stuff like that.
From 3:00 to 4:00, the beat went away to a more HEAVEN-LIKE tune. Unfortunately, it didn't last long, but rather slipped its way back into the generic pattern.
Same with 5:00 to 6:00, only that was a bit better. I loved those notes ^.^
I thought the repetitiveness got in the way of the song. It made it boring compared to the nice, ringing tone of the background sound waves.
So what I'm saying is, get rid of the blobby drum beat, clear up the tune, add some better sounds, and increase the HEAVEN-LIKE part more.
I usually don't write mean reviews like this, but this is the first piece I haven't liked so far. You can make better.
Sorry, had to do it.