I have to say i was able to let my mind wander at the beginning of the song... until the voice kicked it. It does not sound relaxing to me but rather something else. I did like it when you brought in the Flutes. That was a nice addition. The voice still spoiled it for me.
Overall: Not Bad
To be honest i kind of had a bit of a spoiler to that myself. i just thought it gave it a more moder pop culture, like moby. I'll definetly take that into consideration. thanks for the help.