Very nice

I like it how you are experimenting more with using actual lyrics. I am not sure what this "eJay 5" thing is supposed to be, as it is apparently a kind of machine. The voice featured in this was pretty nice and didn't come off as annoying or anything like that. There were not that many tunes, but that worked out just fine for itself. This seemed to have everything a standard song of its kind would need to have. It seems as though you are indeed improving after all of these submissions.